Overall, maybe this is good for me as I always think that my path can just go straight and I'm always right on track. Despite the ups and turns during this project, I did learned a lot and got closer with my group mates. This lesson teaches me that I have to be more self confident, don't be afraid to add more suggestion to what have been discussed and the bad presentation taught me that it's never too much when it comes to extra clips.
Okay move on, this is the shots of the final assignment (with a little different storyline) :
Scene
1: Hospital
Shot 1 – (ws) a doctor is walking in a corridor and walks
into a room as the doctor checking a file.
Shot 2 – (ms) the doctor explain the situation to the
parents of a patient as the patience is still unconscious.
Scene
2: Predinner
Shot 1 – (rear ms) The girl is at the kitchen helping her
mother prepare for dinner
Shot 2 – (cu) a close up of the girl cutting the carrots.
After a while, the girl accidently cut her finger.
Shot 3 – (mcu) her finger bleed. The girl wanted to scream
but no voice came out.
Scene
3: Dinner
Shot 1 – (ms) At the table, both parents of the girl are
doing different things. Father is reading newspaper, while mother is on the
phone.
Shot 2 – (os) from the father
Shot 3 – (os) from the mother
Shot 4 – (ws) Both parents are gone, only left the girl,
both papers and phone are left on the original places
Shot 5 – (cu) She makes sound using the cutlery and the
items on the table
Scene 4
Shot 1 – (mcu/os) the Mac screen as she makes music in
Garage band
Shot 2 – (ms) As she was making her music, the sound of
parents argueing next room is really loud. So she plucks in her headphone and
covers herself under the comforter.
Shot 3 – (ms) The girl under the cover
Scene 5
Shot 1 – (ws) A class- with teacher and students. She sits
near a group of people but no one bother to contact with her.
Shot 2 – (ms) The students starts to pack up as the teacher
call it the day. While that, they were discussing where to hang out.
Shot 3 – (mws) the girl walk pass them and one of them asked
if she could come along. But they weren’t so kind.
Shot 4 – (mcu) the girl’s reaction towards the question
Shot 5 – (ms) the group overtake her while they were
walking…
Shot 6 – (haws) the girls looked behind and couldn’t find
the quite girl. But they went ahead anyway….
Scene 6
Shot 1 – (mcu) the parents are quarrelling while she sat
still
Shot 2 – (mws) she continues her garage band. Someone knock
her door, asking her to keep quite. Instead, she went out to a park
Scene 7
Shot 1 – (ws) At the park, she is sitting alone, playing her
music from her phone.
Shot 2 – (ms, panning) behind her, there is a shadow luring
at the back and he kidnapped her
Shot 3 – (cu) the music playing stops and the handphone fell
on the ground.
Scene 8
Shot 1 – (wms) the parents play the song on the garage band
and they listen to her song and starts to cry for her.
The trailer
Even though the presentation are presented by our group, the videos are all editing individually.
I wasn't satisfied in the outcome because I knew I could do better if I would have think fast during the shooting….
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